I like it a lot. It's very good for a first time experience of a story.
However, I do hope you will also make individual pages available. I can't say I like the idea of clicking through comic pages to find The Page that I'm looking for as material.
As I rubbed the lamp furiously, I almost expect a lot of grandeur and the emergence of a wisecracking, oddly-skinned, and overall zany wielder of phenomenal cosmic powers. In a way, I got the grand entrance part alright but who was waiting on the other end of it was another story. With a rather arcane and unconventional fashion sense, the least of which had to include see-through pants and other such articles of clothes that left little to the imagination, I was met with the spirit of the lamp. And I'll just say it right now, with her fetching figure and nicely kept but thankfully not too long ponytail in conjunction with her wardrobe, the genie I helped free was...cute. I mean really cute.
I absolutely love this comic, this story you have been telling... but I've got a bone to pick with the past couple pages.
Our hero here, in a fit of rebellion, is knuckles deep in the mistress. Where is the reflection we have seen in so many other pages? She is taking a big risk so her heart has to be beating in her chest. This is also the first time she is likely getting aroused in her new form. Doesn't she notice herself getting wet, her nips exect and rubbing on the back of the mistress. Or what about her fingers, she has to be having the odd new thought that she now can know what this feels like. I want to know about that experience (and it would give you an excuse to drag this foreplay out even longer ;) ).
Regardless if you take my suggestions I am thoroughly enjoying what I am seeing and can't wait till next week. THANK YOU!
Let me start by saying your art is amazing, sexy and inspired. I'm a big fan!
Oddly enough, there's far more relevant research concerning bipedal humanoids with digitigrade legs: Google the stilts people make for costumes and you'll find both functional systems and a great deal of analysis on the physics involved. Skeletal makeup is important for realistic art and these devices are a good projection of what could be. That said, suspension of disbelief is an important part of enjoying sexy saytrs. Cheers! #2c
I love these two characters so much I have been kicking around the idea of writing fiction inspired by them. The dynamic is just so intriguing, both for fucking but also general interaction. I love the little hints at this you have dropped in other pictures, maybe leaving something to the imagination is better?
Nah! I really want to see you do a comic. I know it will be excellent :) Maybe I should e-mail you about commissions.
I like the short hair. I agree with the poster above that I prefer long hair on a girl. But if you carry over the TG theme from the sister image I think the short hair fits better.
For me hair style is a bit along the line of clothes. If somebody were to change gender why would their clothes or hair style change? Over time yes, but those things are sort of separate from biology.
Absolutely love this piece. Even have it has my wallpaper(more pixels would be nice, pretty please!). The ONLY thing I would change is having her grip the sheets a little harder with her left hand and flare her toes out a bit. She looks like she is getting overwhelmed by the (possibly unfamiliar) sensations and the act, its captured so well! Well artist, what is her story (once a guy maybe)? Why is there coercion?
besides that small detail I agree with everyone, of course, you're so gifted. An alternative version of her slightly gagging on the way down would really make my day.
