Though, I still had the feeling that magic is almost completely unknown, like the demons had brought it with them from wherever they came. I just did a quick re-read, and it's funny. Youd think the people of the northern continent would have known more about invaders who had been there... for centuries.
Of course a magically-maintained Berlin Wall around a continent could be possible, I suppose. Be pretty hard to seal things up that tightly. Even ordinary commerce would allow some movement back and forth.
I guess the demons had shut that off for a long time. There couldn't be any nuclear weapons around. If the northerners had them, the demons would have had to shut them down as soon as possible. Too risky to let live freely.
The Merc without a mouth seemed to know something, but almost nothing. Like I know nuclear physics, perhaps? It's hard to guess when so little was stated in the last four books. Of course, for Alison (you win on the spelling, of course), she's been a woman maybe two days. I don't know how long the actual transformation lasted, and he probably will never know for sure. so, there has been almost no time for him to say anything, and lovely Melody hasn't had much chance to talk Alison's head off.
So, I look forward to exploring an interesting new world.
Now, I think that you're doing a great job. Her expressions are excellent and your use of color surrounded by nothing is a great way to emphasize things. The general direction of this story suggests that the demon/people have invaded more than one world. Why would Allen/Allison be entirely ignorant of magic? Yet, you've got obvious magic-wielding women, of perhaps two different organizations (considering the marked difference in their tattoos) and/or countries, or even worlds, as captives? Or, are the two women in a storyline that doesn't intersect with Allison's?
Either way, you've done a bang up job of all this. Please continue.
Well, yes. It is a lot to read into this comic. But your use of color has been extremely limited(and doesn't have to be), so if the same color is used for her eyes, her tatts and her chains, coupled with the sequence where she is being held, getting her breasts massaged and having her eyes change color to the exact same one as her chains, in the last panel, then I think that the colors have certain meanings.
So, if they have taken her over, as evidenced by her eyes being the exact same color as her restraints, why are they taking her in there for some very nasty treatment, maybe ritual murder dedicated to their gods? Wouldn't using her for intell purposes be better? Of course, if she's prisoner #374 and all of her predecessors are equally taken over, why keep feeding another mouth?
But, maybe her own side has put whatever she has in the way of intell behind walls that her captors can't so easily break? What if this next stopping point is designed to break down those walls?
Damn, this is good stuff. The details (teeth and toenails and everything in between) are important, but the setting, the raw emotion, all these are crucial. The idea is to progress the story, Satin Minions is very good at that. I can see the beginnings of something different from what Mistress' original intentions was.
Gawd, this is sooo hot. The little hearts are, in a way, really cutsey, but in another, more meaningful way, says that Mistress isn't just using Allison.
I like the two 'll's better, so I vote for "Allison" over "Alison."
I'm speechless. The quality of all of this is beyond my small ability to describe. The expressions that seem to flicker across Allison's face are simply amazing.
I don't recall saying anything like that. I'd rather I speak for myself, if you DON'T mind.
Yeah, I figured she'd only been a "she" for a few hours. And yeah, the art and story has been great. It's too bad the story can't move faster, but The Artist can only produce so fast, and that is what I'm willing to be happy with.
Yeah! This is very good work here. Allison is so scared you can see her sweating. Well, not yet, anyway. S/He doesn't want to be fucked by somebody else.
You know, that's a part of this story that seems to have been left behind. She may look like a woman, but she's a man and it has been only hours, for her, since she changed. I'll bet most of your readers have forgotten that. But that's part of the basic tenor of this site. Men who are changed against their will, and end up loving it. I think that you need to remind your fans of this.
Allison is most men's wet dream. He has to be hating it, but he's so pulled into Mistress' web that he is practically lost. But he should remember this, sooner or later, and there should be some inner thoughts about how he is feeling. Maybe another weak rebellion, but definitely thoughts of shame and fear. How could he love being fucked? Is he gay? etc, etc.
Now, given the nature of her restraints, she'd almost have to be a seriously powerful mage from a country - or perhaps even a parallel universe - that Mistress' leaders are having considerable trouble with. Since Allison had no real idea what Mistress' people are, they must be fairly new in his world. I do recall that, in the first series, he said that the demons had been on Earth for a few centuries. But he was considerably surprised by the demons apparent relatively normal appearance. The two datums seem to conflict, but I'm sure that The Author could explain, if he/she choose to.
Damn, Mistress is so powerful in this picture. Scary Sexy!! What's with the lights in Alison's hair? Love Alison's face when her collar gets locked down onto the bed.
Did anyone else notice that the bed in the upper portion of this picture is much closer in the middle part. I bet the last part has Mistress placing Alison on the bed with her underneath and Mistress on top.
I think Alison was running on rage, not really thinking. But, if Mistress is taking this as lightly as she seems, then she seems willing to take a little different tack on their "relationship." That'll be interesting.
But first, the spanking...
I'll bet Alison'll like it more than she'll want to admit.
Yeah, maybe he was new at the game. I went back and checked. He was captured after attempting espionage. Kind a skinny guy, too. Not exactly impressive muscles. Oh well. Now he... she's got an impressive chest. Butt. Waistline. Just about everything about ...him is impressive. Great artwork.
Yeah, Mistress definitely looked... like she was thinking, "Yawn. Well, at least she's getting this out of her system." Great art. Allison looked absolutely furious and Mistress was totally calm. The blurred effect is so good for showing rapid movements. But I'm kind of disappointed in the mercenary. Nothing he did was tactically feasible. Not so far as I understand it, anyway. There was nothing in the way of skill there. Just rage. Not good when you're tackling somebody that much bigger and heavier.
When Allison (what is her real name?) got pissed - I loved the expression, the heat in her chest! I'm no martial artist, but I can't see her winning a wrestling match. Not even if Allison goes for the kill. And she can't win, not even then. Mistress is just one of many, in a society that Allison doesn't really know.
Still, it's gonna be interesting. I'd like to see Allison gain some respect, at the very least.
Politics isn't my interest, either. You draw some really hot, sexy work, and I wouldn't want you to stop. But Allison is going to go places with her Mistress and I'd like to see what those places are like. You know, maybe Mistress goes to a beauty parlor and Allison gets to service the owner, who happens to be a friend - a different sort of demon, maybe a scaley, snake-ish kind of lady. Stuff like that. If I wanted something less sexy, I wouldn't be here.
Great outfit. Kind of super-villainy and major scary. I'm betting Allison is trying to circle around and tackle Mistress from behind. She can't go toe-to-toe with somebody that much taller and stronger. If she can keep her nerve, she'll circle around and go for things like the woman's knees or her back. Things that would give her a chance to run for it.
If she can keep her nerve. I'm betting she will. She used to be a soldier, a mercenary, and probably a good one. Getting changed into a hottie super-slut doesn't change that. Not completely. Allison has spent too much time on the battlefield to just fold.
But, like ubo said, her unthinking "mistress" is a bad indicator for her future freedom. Especially when she knows that her captor's name is Esma Vallochar. Not a good sign at all.
This is really good stuff. I especially like Allison's expression in the last scene. Don't forget. This is a trained soldier who later became a merc, and survived who knows how long? She may not be such an easy mark.
So, is the soldier/mercenary going to make a comeback? Will Mistress get a chance to punish the poor little thing? What's going to happen next? Karate vs Magic? Might be interesting if she gives Mistress a serious reason to spank. Or worse!
I'd kinda like to see Allison hold her own for a moment of two.
Wow! The expressions you put on these people's faces. Fantastic! Allison just blew her own mind, but I can see that she's getting ready for round two. Those eyes are just a little too open, I think. Maybe it's Allison's mouth. Maybe the dialogue.
This is some really great art. Excellent story, too. Are you going to get beyond the strictly sensual in this story? "Allison" is some kind of soldier - a mercenary - and has been captured by "Demons." They don't seem all that demonic. The general concept of a demon is nothing but black and white. No possibility of being less than purely, completely evil. Vallochar and the other demon seemed to be a lot like ordinary people, not at all pure evil. Are you going to show any other aspects of the Demons' society? If Allison was a soldier, she probably knows something of empty-handed fighting, of the other mercenaries and what they are doing. Is Mistress Vallochar going to interrogate her? That could be ~interesting~ There's a lot about Vallochar's people that could be really interesting. I'd really like to see more than just the inside of her Mistress's house, but even that is really good.
