Melody does seem the type to fall victim to clever thinking and teamwork. I'd like to see the Shy one brought out of her shell while her sister's taken down a few notches.
Your work is sublime, take your time. Honestly, having a few chapters in monocolor wouldn't be the worst thing either, Genie and Wetware have engaging stories regardless.
I love how this removes any preconceived notion that Alison is for Torrin's exclusive use. She understands pretty early on that her role is determined at the whim of her Master. She is entitled to nothing, all while Torrin receives the credit of being a graceful host.
Wait so... our protagonist fucked themself wearing the ball gag, genie forced it on them before sending them back in time, and now they're going to get fucked until it's pulled off again... who wore the ball gag first?? @_@
I think she's just figured out she's no longer collared. I wonder how long it took her to realize her new freedom. Could be that morning, could be a few days... when the chains get light enough one stops noticing.
I love this moment. She takes an active role in her fucking, and his response is to make her submit further. This makes the moment she cums and he still fucks her so much more enticing. It's not about what she wants or is in the mood for, it's about what he demands of her.
She keeps telling herself that it's only a simulation, the pleasure she's experiencing isn't real... right? As the admin ups the intensity, he notes her resistance against cthulhu.exe relaxes, and the program installs effortlessly.