gnome_man 2021-12-14 03:25:35
AI Portrait Alison
Who was that painter who cut off his ear? I thought he died a long time ago, but maybe he reincarnated into a computer.
gnome_man 2020-04-08 18:59:37
Wetware Test 01
I AM a Patron! I paid you $10.00! on April First! to be a Patron and I still can't get on these god damned pages! You need to solve this!
gnome_man 2020-04-08 04:59:40
Alison 02
I'll hang around. Interesting stuff here. Though you have to keep your eyes open.
gnome_man 2020-04-01 05:01:16
Alison 02
When Alison was first changed over he/she was a cornflower yellow blonde. After her first time with him, and I would imagine quite a few more times, since she had been working at the cafeteria for a while, she was still a cornflower blonde. Now, she is a dark blonde. I believe this happened when she fucked Torrin with his demon mojo on full. What does that mean for her and her possible growth as a sorcerer? Or do the blue glows mean something entirely different?

And the previous picture shows her wearing a wrap around her throat, obscuring her "lighter chains." Could they have become so light that she returned to her homeland on a spying mission?

I don't think a slave would be allowed to hide her chains, even those as light as hers, for any minor reason. But, I wouldn't be surprised that Torrin and Esma (Mistress Vallochar) have plans for her.
gnome_man 2019-11-12 10:04:50
Lighter Chains V6 28
g time, no talk. Looks like fucking Torrin has changed
Alison's hair color. Has his half-demon seed caused some changes inside her like she was thinking?
gnome_man 2019-02-07 09:01:53
Lighter Chains V5 31
Very good.
gnome_man 2018-12-30 08:30:22
Lighter Chains V5 25
This is hotter than hot. So sexy!
gnome_man 2018-09-29 22:20:02
Twins 00
Hard to tell, but they seem to have their horns hooked together.
gnome_man 2018-09-29 22:12:34
Twins 00
They look rather androgynous. Are they male? Or, immature female?
gnome_man 2018-09-24 05:04:24
Lighter Chains V5 24
Gawd dawm! This is some hot, hot, hot work here. I could watch it for hours and lose myself in the rise and fall of her tits, the flutter of her eyes and the moves of her hips. The whole gestalt is so good. At least as good as a serious movie. A Pixar-level movie. Top quality work here.

gnome_man 2018-07-06 06:35:43
Lighter Chains V5 16
I think he's having a nightmare. Whatever Demon power he has is starting up, he's mostly asleep and the poor darling is about to find out what his power can do. I hope she doesn't have to be healed by some other demon old lady (witch) that we haven't been introduced to yet.

These demons must be pretty thin on the ground, considering how few Alison has run into. It's not easy to cross over from their world to ours.
gnome_man 2018-04-10 19:18:57
Lighter Chains V4 08 No Text High Res
These two pictures need no words...
gnome_man 2018-04-03 04:16:52
familiar service 01
She's quite the hottie.
gnome_man 2018-04-03 04:15:11
familiar service 01
Well, it's an interesting turn-around on things, since the norm is quite different.

Reading between the lines, she wants to be dominated by the demon and is going to keep giving it away to avoid him "losing control".

Interesting idea.
gnome_man 2018-03-31 20:57:15
Lighter Chains V5 Alt Cover
Gawd, this chick is hot.
gnome_man 2018-03-21 00:49:26
Lighter Chains V5 02
Here she is, flirting with him like she was always a woman. And she's so good at it, too!

Why is her neck ring still so big if she no longer has the wrist bracelets?

And, don't women of her world change their clothes every day?
gnome_man 2018-03-21 00:33:56
Lighter Chains V5 01
I love the motion effects. She is so cute!
gnome_man 2018-03-04 20:51:52
Link Page Cover
I'd like to see the rest of this, but not if it takes you away from Lighter Chains
gnome_man 2018-03-04 20:49:37
Link Page 05 High Res
Hey! She's yummy!
gnome_man 2018-01-23 06:46:47
Lighter Chains V4 26
Dayam! This babe has some serious issues... Uh! I mean, ideas! She looks like she's in heaven in the second to the last picture.

I wonder what she was like before...

Great artwork, BTW. Damn good stuff. She's just the prettiest little thing. Make a great bedwarmer.
gnome_man 2018-01-22 06:05:44
Lighter Chains V4 25
Of course, maybe it's something like a lightsaber, and would be effective against modern weapons.

I would like to see something like that.
gnome_man 2018-01-22 06:02:26
Lighter Chains V4 25
Yeah, she does look like she's checking him out. Notice the sword he's carrying? Compare that to the machine in the first few panels of the first book. It's hard for me to put the two together. That big sphere couldn't have been made (in our world) when swords were effective weapons. But the man wasn't dressed like he was wearing ceremonial clothes, so the juxtaposition of the two is very interesting.
gnome_man 2018-01-16 08:43:16
Lighter Chains V4 25
I don't know. I think Mistress looks a little... annoyed? Not quite, but maybe she's wondering why Alison is so clingy. She might have liked the clingyness at first, but maybe she's getting tired of it.

On the other hand, Alison is tiny compared to the figures we've seen, and her sexual transformation had to have been out and out traumatic. Under the circumstances, I'd be clingy, too.

These are demons.
gnome_man 2018-01-12 06:20:46
Lighter Chains V4 24
Yeah. Cute as a button and sizzling hot, to boot. And I'll bet Melody's giving her a major line of bullshit, too.

The Old Hand's always playing tricks like these. But it might backfire.

Have to wait and see.
gnome_man 2018-01-03 22:40:13
Lighter Chains V4 23
Ooowee! Alison's really getting into rug munching. I can't blame her/him. But maybe she has acquired a certain perspective that I lack. I've always wondered what it would be like to be a woman.
gnome_man 2018-01-02 07:52:40
Lighter Chains V4 22
I like her different dresses. Very nice, if the building has good climate-controls. Not very good if she should happen to go out.

Is that going to happen? Should be interesting to see what the world outside looks like. Might be kind of hard for Alison to contact whatever "Underground" that may exist out there. After all, how could he prove who he is to the Resistance?
gnome_man 2018-01-02 07:47:14
Lighter Chains V4 22
So this woman who used to be a man is a natural mimic? Or her physical skills are such that she is adapting very easily. Either suggests that when she was a "he", he was a highly skilled athlete. Probably, since he was a mercenary, he was a very skillful martial artist.

Is that the reason why her manacles haven't been reduced over time? After all, you do suggest that she has been a captive for a while. Or Mistress has used some method to speed up her hair's growth.
gnome_man 2017-12-29 06:20:51
Lighter Chains V4 20
I thought that you would. The quality of your work is too good for you to be an amateur. I was particularly impressed with the feelings that Alison was expressing. Her anxiety was delicious in the first part and the total adoration she had in the last part was just plain lovely.

I've seen the wooden models and I doubt that they would be sufficiently flexible for the poses you'd need here. On the other hand, there must be software that could be useful to you.
gnome_man 2017-12-28 00:16:48
Lighter Chains V4 21
My god! This is so Hot!
gnome_man 2017-12-27 08:26:52
Lighter Chains V4 20
Artists often use models, right? It sounds stupid, but there are highly articulated manikins that you can use without hiring somebody. On the other hand, though the picture in question made me wonder as well, the psychology of it is pretty interesting.
gnome_man 2017-12-24 06:50:53
Lighter Chains V4 20
I love the sheer adoration that Alison has in Her eyes. It perfectly matches the possessiveness is Mistresses eyes. Lovely.

I hope that Mistress doesn't have other lovers. That would be so crushing for Alison.
gnome_man 2017-11-01 20:39:32
Halloween 2017
Aw! Young Love... And we all saw it begin.
gnome_man 2017-10-15 05:22:00
Dark Altar 20
And I can draw water any time I want to, so there. (faucet running in the background) You're not so special!

I'm special! Really, really special! Don't tell anyone, but my first name is ed.
gnome_man 2017-10-15 05:19:26
Dark Altar 20
Thirteen days! I'm going to hold my breath!

Nyaaah aaah aaah!
gnome_man 2017-10-15 05:16:52
Dark Altar 20
Yeah. I've heard how hard it is to draw water, too. But you do it with considerable persuasive skill.

Now that I've buttered you up, where is Alison? I want my Alison! Give me more Alison! I've just got to have my...

Oh! Hi, Alison! So good to see... Hey, what's with that gun?

Oh, please! Please! I didn't mean it!

Please don't...
gnome_man 2017-10-10 05:12:02
Dark Altar 19
You are a damn good artist and writer.
gnome_man 2017-10-10 05:10:52
Dark Altar 19
It certainly is a good display of water splashing around. Very nice. I've read that water is hard to draw.

It's interesting that she knew what to expect. That suggests that she has been down there before or that there is something about that area that tells her she can take a shower there. Maybe the possible towel rod on the wall told her what to expect. It is a fascinating look at what might be a fairly mundane, everyday use of magic (after all, what is keeping the water from making a mess?) or possibly just a tiled area with other methods of limiting where the water splashes.

I vote for magic, since that alcove is very shallow.

Since I can't get a good look at the spot, I can't guess which.
gnome_man 2017-10-01 07:24:15
Dark Altar 06
Yeah. I'm not real interested in seeing blood and such.
gnome_man 2017-10-01 07:20:28
Dark Altar 18
Well. the two of them are down in the bottom of a hole. I'd think that she'll have to deal with that, unless, of course, he does.

On the other hand, maybe somebody will enter their little hide-away the same way he did. There didn't seem to be any place to cook, so I think he'll be leaving soon.

Does it seem like the purple glow of her shackles and her eyes seem like it's diminished to anyone else?

He didn't look so awfully large that a woman would automatically reject him. Why did they take an enemy woman and force her to do this? Why an enemy? Is she an enemy? The shackles would strongly suggest that she doesn't want to be there. Are they going to send her back with some kind of a mystical virus weapon?

That is a lot of sperm, and it looks a little odd. Why use someone who would otherwise refuse?

They don't want the big guy (demon?) to get loose. They want to keep the woman - a sorceress, if the tattoos are any indication - under control. She is bait of some project, and the project required a witchy woman. Maybe the child that could be growing on her requires that witchieness to properly develop.

Lots of interesting questions. I'd still like to look in on Alison.

Wouldn't it be terrific way to acquire a spy? Put them through a sex-change and then tell them that they could get changed back if they were a good girl. Or boy.
gnome_man 2017-09-11 20:20:06
Link Page 02a
I'm sorry, but if you didn't have that little picture in the lower right corner, I'd have no idea who she is. I want to see a picture that I don't have to guess at.
gnome_man 2017-09-11 07:14:08
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You've done quite a few sketches lately. Are you going to do more than just sketches? I'm sure that you are doing this as a side thing, and this work takes you away from "Lighter Chains," which I would not particularly like.

But, I don't tell people what to do. I just would like to see Alison's further adventures.
gnome_man 2017-09-06 04:27:58
lc outfit color
Gloriously beautiful.
gnome_man 2017-08-30 21:09:01
Dark Altar 09
Purply eyes. Seems like she's not exactly in full possession of her wits. I wish I knew more of the backstory. Hopefully, the Writer will fill things in a bit.
gnome_man 2017-08-28 00:55:26
gg antagonist 24b
A couple of hot babes. Nice to see some new faces. What are they, 2nd generation? 3rd gen?
gnome_man 2017-08-26 20:12:43
Dark Altar 08
She'd have to looking into a reflective surface - do demons have smooth, really shiny chests? - to have the glow of her eyes show in the big mirror. Or have her head turned a lot more around than it is.

On the other hand, I can see why you included it. I don't expect perfection, anyway. Plus, I couldn't draw this well to save my life.

The story is so interesting. This chick is a major league breast girl, isn't she? We've seen this from a different perspective, and at a different time, place, and breast-massager.
gnome_man 2017-08-24 06:25:24
Dark Altar 07
Putting her with her back to the mirror was a verrry nice touch. Loved it. She didn't seem anything but happy with him. Can't be her clone.
gnome_man 2017-08-21 23:40:47
vol4 s 10
She's looking pretty happy. I guess his new life agrees with her.
gnome_man 2017-08-21 04:00:44
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I see what the numbers mean.
gnome_man 2017-08-20 06:16:04
Dark Altar 06
The color quality, the line work, all are done so well. I wish I could draw like that.

But, she has all those snazzy tattoos - I would think that she'd have had a pretty good idea of what was going down... I mean, besides her down into the hole. The fact that the creature coming through - looks a bit like Mistress in general layout - is confined would suggest that the guys who tossed her in are trying to keep things under control, so to speak.

This is very different from where Alison is. Maybe the whatzit coming through isn't as well mannered as Mistress and her people are.

Looks pretty interesting. Pretty cool lighting effects, too.
gnome_man 2017-08-20 06:06:36
Dark Altar 06
Well, it doesn't look like her clone. Kinda big, and that... thing hanging between its legs doesn't really go with any sort of femininity that I'd go for.
gnome_man 2017-08-17 04:31:21
Dark Altar 05
Well now, that would be interesting. But why would the creature clone her? The guys who tossed her in there have got to be watching.
gnome_man 2017-08-16 20:56:18
Dark Altar 05
Damn! That is some gooood color contrast! Super spooky. Something seems to be materializing on that big bad bed. Wheee!
gnome_man 2017-08-16 06:44:43
Forceplay Comic 02
I like the way you show her bra underneath her shirt. Subtle. Really hard to get that right, I imagine. But I think you nailed it.
gnome_man 2017-08-15 01:45:46
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Lovely babe, but are we going to get anything more? Details? Colors? A story? Now, that would be nice.
gnome_man 2017-08-13 06:13:51
Dark Altar 04
I'm betting the reflection will turn into a door. She's the flavor of the month for a picky demon who doesn't play with his food.
gnome_man 2017-08-09 06:58:59
Dark Altar 01
Though, I still had the feeling that magic is almost completely unknown, like the demons had brought it with them from wherever they came. I just did a quick re-read, and it's funny. Youd think the people of the northern continent would have known more about invaders who had been there... for centuries.

Of course a magically-maintained Berlin Wall around a continent could be possible, I suppose. Be pretty hard to seal things up that tightly. Even ordinary commerce would allow some movement back and forth.

I guess the demons had shut that off for a long time. There couldn't be any nuclear weapons around. If the northerners had them, the demons would have had to shut them down as soon as possible. Too risky to let live freely.
gnome_man 2017-08-09 06:58:10
Dark Altar 01
No prob.

The Merc without a mouth seemed to know something, but almost nothing. Like I know nuclear physics, perhaps? It's hard to guess when so little was stated in the last four books. Of course, for Alison (you win on the spelling, of course), she's been a woman maybe two days. I don't know how long the actual transformation lasted, and he probably will never know for sure. so, there has been almost no time for him to say anything, and lovely Melody hasn't had much chance to talk Alison's head off.

So, I look forward to exploring an interesting new world.
gnome_man 2017-08-08 04:36:45
Dark Altar 01
It would be nice to talk directly to you.
gnome_man 2017-08-08 04:35:54
Dark Altar 01
Now, I think that you're doing a great job. Her expressions are excellent and your use of color surrounded by nothing is a great way to emphasize things. The general direction of this story suggests that the demon/people have invaded more than one world. Why would Allen/Allison be entirely ignorant of magic? Yet, you've got obvious magic-wielding women, of perhaps two different organizations (considering the marked difference in their tattoos) and/or countries, or even worlds, as captives? Or, are the two women in a storyline that doesn't intersect with Allison's?

Either way, you've done a bang up job of all this. Please continue.
gnome_man 2017-08-08 04:34:54
Dark Altar 01
Well, yes. It is a lot to read into this comic. But your use of color has been extremely limited(and doesn't have to be), so if the same color is used for her eyes, her tatts and her chains, coupled with the sequence where she is being held, getting her breasts massaged and having her eyes change color to the exact same one as her chains, in the last panel, then I think that the colors have certain meanings.

It's only reasonable.
gnome_man 2017-08-02 09:01:28
Well. She looks pretty happy. I'd be happy, too, as long as I didn't get sacrificed to some alien god.
gnome_man 2017-07-29 21:57:07
Dark Altar 01
So, if they have taken her over, as evidenced by her eyes being the exact same color as her restraints, why are they taking her in there for some very nasty treatment, maybe ritual murder dedicated to their gods? Wouldn't using her for intell purposes be better? Of course, if she's prisoner #374 and all of her predecessors are equally taken over, why keep feeding another mouth?

But, maybe her own side has put whatever she has in the way of intell behind walls that her captors can't so easily break? What if this next stopping point is designed to break down those walls?

I guess I'll have to wait and seee...
gnome_man 2017-07-17 08:27:35
Lighter Chains V4 16
Damn, this is good stuff. The details (teeth and toenails and everything in between) are important, but the setting, the raw emotion, all these are crucial. The idea is to progress the story, Satin Minions is very good at that. I can see the beginnings of something different from what Mistress' original intentions was.

I am very interested.
gnome_man 2017-07-13 07:26:26
Lighter Chains V4 15
Allison has such beauty in her eyes.
gnome_man 2017-06-28 08:05:13
Lighter Chains V4 15
Gawd, this is sooo hot. The little hearts are, in a way, really cutsey, but in another, more meaningful way, says that Mistress isn't just using Allison.

I like the two 'll's better, so I vote for "Allison" over "Alison."
gnome_man 2017-06-19 07:36:57
Tattoo Page 03
Tattoo-girl's eyes have gone all purpley on her. Doesn't look good!! What will happen if Allison meets her?
gnome_man 2017-06-11 08:59:37
Lighter Chains V4 14
I'm sorry that "Lurker" has to keep butting in on this excellent, beautiful, sexy story. I suppose he has nothing better to do.
gnome_man 2017-06-04 05:33:03
Lighter Chains V4 13
The beauty of your artistry is of a profound sort, not often attained by so many who call themselves, "artist."
gnome_man 2017-05-28 11:01:18
familiar 192
It almost looks like the horned woman is blushing.
gnome_man 2017-05-06 06:21:12
Lighter Chains V4 09
I'm speechless. The quality of all of this is beyond my small ability to describe. The expressions that seem to flicker across Allison's face are simply amazing.
gnome_man 2017-04-16 10:23:46
Lighter Chains V4 08
Love the hearts. A little late in the season, though. Allison is going to have a hell of a time protesting this later on.

The artwork on this is tremendous. Her face is exquisate.
gnome_man 2017-04-10 07:38:41
Lighter Chains V4 07
Oh wow! Her eyes just reach out and grab you. It's like the first time she had real sex. Lovely!

The animation is great, too.
gnome_man 2017-04-04 09:03:16
Lighter Chains V4 06
I don't recall saying anything like that. I'd rather I speak for myself, if you DON'T mind.

Yeah, I figured she'd only been a "she" for a few hours. And yeah, the art and story has been great. It's too bad the story can't move faster, but The Artist can only produce so fast, and that is what I'm willing to be happy with.
gnome_man 2017-04-01 08:28:40
Lighter Chains V4 06
Yeah! This is very good work here. Allison is so scared you can see her sweating. Well, not yet, anyway. S/He doesn't want to be fucked by somebody else.

You know, that's a part of this story that seems to have been left behind. She may look like a woman, but she's a man and it has been only hours, for her, since she changed. I'll bet most of your readers have forgotten that. But that's part of the basic tenor of this site. Men who are changed against their will, and end up loving it. I think that you need to remind your fans of this.

Allison is most men's wet dream. He has to be hating it, but he's so pulled into Mistress' web that he is practically lost. But he should remember this, sooner or later, and there should be some inner thoughts about how he is feeling. Maybe another weak rebellion, but definitely thoughts of shame and fear. How could he love being fucked? Is he gay? etc, etc.
gnome_man 2017-03-26 06:04:17
Lighter Chains V4 05
The visuals are just outstanding!
gnome_man 2017-03-26 06:03:30
Lighter Chains V4 05
That's for sure. I wish I was there to help her along!
gnome_man 2017-03-20 02:58:48
Lighter Chains V4 04
Look at her face! She's gonna go to town on that dildo.
gnome_man 2017-03-18 07:47:48
Lighter Chains V4 04
gnome_man 2017-03-15 07:31:46
Lighter Chains V4 03
Can it get hotter? Continued, next rock.
gnome_man 2017-01-09 07:16:26
Daayamm! Check out them tatas!

Now, given the nature of her restraints, she'd almost have to be a seriously powerful mage from a country - or perhaps even a parallel universe - that Mistress' leaders are having considerable trouble with. Since Allison had no real idea what Mistress' people are, they must be fairly new in his world. I do recall that, in the first series, he said that the demons had been on Earth for a few centuries. But he was considerably surprised by the demons apparent relatively normal appearance. The two datums seem to conflict, but I'm sure that The Author could explain, if he/she choose to.

He/She doesn't have to.

Check out them tatas!!
gnome_man 2016-12-25 08:14:48
shoes 01
I'd die to have a set of legs like that wrapped around my head.
gnome_man 2016-12-04 03:25:02
Lighter Chains V3 30
Is that called working under the table?
gnome_man 2016-12-04 03:24:10
Lighter Chains V3 30
Yeah! I'm not sure if my health will stand the strain of a long wait for more chapters.
gnome_man 2016-11-25 22:21:02
Lighter Chains V3 28
"worth less" or "worthless"? There is a difference, you know.
gnome_man 2016-11-24 06:57:25
Lighter Chains V3 28
Or just constipated because you couldn't do this quality of work on your best day?
gnome_man 2016-11-21 08:18:08
Lighter Chains V3 28
Damn, Mistress is so powerful in this picture. Scary Sexy!! What's with the lights in Alison's hair? Love Alison's face when her collar gets locked down onto the bed.

gnome_man 2016-11-05 07:25:16
Lighter Chains V3 27
Did anyone else notice that the bed in the upper portion of this picture is much closer in the middle part. I bet the last part has Mistress placing Alison on the bed with her underneath and Mistress on top.
gnome_man 2016-11-04 06:10:25
Lighter Chains V3 27
Really good artwork. Do you sell collections?
gnome_man 2016-11-04 06:09:12
Lighter Chains V3 27
I think Alison was running on rage, not really thinking. But, if Mistress is taking this as lightly as she seems, then she seems willing to take a little different tack on their "relationship." That'll be interesting.

But first, the spanking...

I'll bet Alison'll like it more than she'll want to admit.
gnome_man 2016-10-26 06:55:27
Lighter Chains V3 26
Yeah, maybe he was new at the game. I went back and checked. He was captured after attempting espionage. Kind a skinny guy, too. Not exactly impressive muscles. Oh well. Now he... she's got an impressive chest. Butt. Waistline. Just about everything about ...him is impressive. Great artwork.
gnome_man 2016-10-23 07:13:59
Lighter Chains V3 26
Yeah, Mistress definitely looked... like she was thinking, "Yawn. Well, at least she's getting this out of her system." Great art. Allison looked absolutely furious and Mistress was totally calm. The blurred effect is so good for showing rapid movements. But I'm kind of disappointed in the mercenary. Nothing he did was tactically feasible. Not so far as I understand it, anyway. There was nothing in the way of skill there. Just rage. Not good when you're tackling somebody that much bigger and heavier.
gnome_man 2016-10-12 22:36:10
Lighter Chains V3 25
When Allison (what is her real name?) got pissed - I loved the expression, the heat in her chest! I'm no martial artist, but I can't see her winning a wrestling match. Not even if Allison goes for the kill. And she can't win, not even then. Mistress is just one of many, in a society that Allison doesn't really know.

Still, it's gonna be interesting. I'd like to see Allison gain some respect, at the very least.

Great artwork.
gnome_man 2016-10-09 08:09:44
Lighter Chains V3 24
Politics isn't my interest, either. You draw some really hot, sexy work, and I wouldn't want you to stop. But Allison is going to go places with her Mistress and I'd like to see what those places are like. You know, maybe Mistress goes to a beauty parlor and Allison gets to service the owner, who happens to be a friend - a different sort of demon, maybe a scaley, snake-ish kind of lady. Stuff like that. If I wanted something less sexy, I wouldn't be here.
gnome_man 2016-10-09 07:52:43
Lighter Chains V3 24
Great outfit. Kind of super-villainy and major scary. I'm betting Allison is trying to circle around and tackle Mistress from behind. She can't go toe-to-toe with somebody that much taller and stronger. If she can keep her nerve, she'll circle around and go for things like the woman's knees or her back. Things that would give her a chance to run for it.

If she can keep her nerve. I'm betting she will. She used to be a soldier, a mercenary, and probably a good one. Getting changed into a hottie super-slut doesn't change that. Not completely. Allison has spent too much time on the battlefield to just fold.

This is gonna be good.
gnome_man 2016-10-06 22:02:44
Lighter Chains V3 23
It's gonna be really interesting what happens next.
gnome_man 2016-10-05 01:13:35
Lighter Chains V3 22
But, like ubo said, her unthinking "mistress" is a bad indicator for her future freedom. Especially when she knows that her captor's name is Esma Vallochar. Not a good sign at all.
gnome_man 2016-10-05 01:06:48
Lighter Chains V3 22
This is really good stuff. I especially like Allison's expression in the last scene. Don't forget. This is a trained soldier who later became a merc, and survived who knows how long? She may not be such an easy mark.
gnome_man 2016-09-30 04:59:47
Lighter Chains V3 21
So, is the soldier/mercenary going to make a comeback? Will Mistress get a chance to punish the poor little thing? What's going to happen next? Karate vs Magic? Might be interesting if she gives Mistress a serious reason to spank. Or worse!

I'd kinda like to see Allison hold her own for a moment of two.
gnome_man 2016-09-04 05:50:24
Lighter Chains V3 18
Wow! The expressions you put on these people's faces. Fantastic! Allison just blew her own mind, but I can see that she's getting ready for round two. Those eyes are just a little too open, I think. Maybe it's Allison's mouth. Maybe the dialogue.
gnome_man 2016-08-29 21:56:06
Lighter Chains V3 17
This is some really great art. Excellent story, too. Are you going to get beyond the strictly sensual in this story? "Allison" is some kind of soldier - a mercenary - and has been captured by "Demons." They don't seem all that demonic. The general concept of a demon is nothing but black and white. No possibility of being less than purely, completely evil. Vallochar and the other demon seemed to be a lot like ordinary people, not at all pure evil. Are you going to show any other aspects of the Demons' society? If Allison was a soldier, she probably knows something of empty-handed fighting, of the other mercenaries and what they are doing. Is Mistress Vallochar going to interrogate her? That could be ~interesting~ There's a lot about Vallochar's people that could be really interesting. I'd really like to see more than just the inside of her Mistress's house, but even that is really good.