I like the idea. Would also be possible to close the circle to the other mercs that entered with her. Make her get to see them, make her see one serving as a pony girl, or have one massive monster beast (thinking of an Oger or a centaur) try to get to have his way with her or stand guard, while she recognizes him as a former merc, with nothing of the old self left in there but pure animalistic Lust for her new body.
Melody does seem the type to fall victim to clever thinking and teamwork. I'd like to see the Shy one brought out of her shell while her sister's taken down a few notches.
This moment is so hard on the psychological level. Realizing what you've lost (but at the same time, gained) from undergoing such a PERFECT transformation. There's no questions asked here.
You are the best TG MTF artist in the world. You capture it so brilliantly.
Thank you for doing what you do. The world needs more people like you.
yes please... I'd love to see these two get temperamental, shape-shift below the belt, and then 'defy' Melody from both ends at once, ifyaknowhatimean...
My favorite thing about this panel is the contrast between the twins: the modesty of the one on the left vs. the IDGAF body language of her sister on the right -- I can tell she's gonna be a problem for Melody, but that'll just make her breaking all the more enjoyable to witness (perhaps she might need an assist from her mistress' in order to break her completely)!!
Feet are one of the most underappreciated elements of a woman's body. Alison has the most beautiful pair of feet in human existence. I'm so glad they're being emphasized.
I think the problem is that you can't rewind it and go to the previous page. You only can go forward. But that can be solved by adding a button in the lower left corner. Second problem I can imagine is that probably some people want to save separate pages as jpg or png on their hard drives. And thus mp4 does not solve their problem. Maybe if you don't want to lose some of the anmation make alternate version a series of gif's?
On other note. I personally like this story and format. It is funny because it looks as if you did a fanfic of your own work :D
Sorry Admin, the MP4 is a great addition but still not low enough tech for us viewers. Perhaps you can send printouts to our mailing addresses? Thanks a ton
I really liked this story arc. The ending was a nice touch, but I almost want an epilogue, just giving a bit more of an explanation on how it all happened. Also, I kind of think she should totally get a "reputation" on the server... It could be both beneficial and yet also negative, depending on how fast it spreads...
Please .....go back to the previous format of static jpgs....etc This interactive thing is both problematic on my computer and frankly annoying....or post a low tech alternative
Nice and smooth animations here; looking forward to seeing more when they come out! (Also, loaded just fine for my Firefox browser, so that's at least one instance of success outside of Chrome)
