Absolutely love it! I'm glad to see something resembling flash technique still lives to this day. Excellent use of slide into frame and other ways of getting animation even when there isn't at the start.
It was mainly an aesthetic choice here. There definitely is a servant hierarchy but it's not so strict. The three of them are basically on the same level with their chunky collars and menial duties.
The two maids act superior to Alison because she is shorter, younger and newer. They're a little taken aback at her ability to "climb the ranks" so quickly, but they take it in stride.
I'm overweight, myself -- not morbidly-obese, mind you, but I do get the occasional remarks about my belly and unsolicited suggestions on what I could do about it. While negative attention about my body does make me feel awkward (to varying degrees depending upon the context of the given situation), I don't take it personally and get all butt-hurt about it.
So take my comment as self-deprecating humor and move-on.
I can just imagine the guy in this sort of looking at the scene and the orb with wide eyes as a million thoughts run through his mind at the possibilities of this... And he used it to make a demon guard cum.
I totally have an entire plot in my mind for PotG2 that I would love to see, but I'm always told that writers don't want to hear it, so they don't get accused of stealing ideas.
I totally want to GIVE this idea away, but still.
2022-06-05 22:22:46
Would LOVE another episode of this!
2022-06-04 15:01:34
if you want people to know this isn't just a cover you should add the cover as a separate, and put something like "animated with text" or "Text Story" on the thumbnail for this :)
This makes me wonder if Torrin hasn't always been the hyper-exaggerated specimen of masculinity that he -- perhaps he's had a similar journey to the one Allison has experienced and is still experiencing?
Maybe he started out as male -- but as one with the less-pronounced physique that Allison had had in her pre-forced-transition mode. Maybe through the trials of being force-transitioned and subsequently broken and thoroughly bottomed and learning to adopt and even embrace his new submissive female identity, Torrin had to prove himself worthy of regaining male status -- a process most initiates don't have the right stuff to achieve that ultimate goal and one which likely will elude Allison for the remainder of her time in this realm, no matter how much lighter her chains become.
I like the idea. Would also be possible to close the circle to the other mercs that entered with her. Make her get to see them, make her see one serving as a pony girl, or have one massive monster beast (thinking of an Oger or a centaur) try to get to have his way with her or stand guard, while she recognizes him as a former merc, with nothing of the old self left in there but pure animalistic Lust for her new body.
Melody does seem the type to fall victim to clever thinking and teamwork. I'd like to see the Shy one brought out of her shell while her sister's taken down a few notches.
This moment is so hard on the psychological level. Realizing what you've lost (but at the same time, gained) from undergoing such a PERFECT transformation. There's no questions asked here.
You are the best TG MTF artist in the world. You capture it so brilliantly.
Thank you for doing what you do. The world needs more people like you.
2022-05-23 04:55:42
Lol. Pwned.
2022-05-22 08:21:44
yes please... I'd love to see these two get temperamental, shape-shift below the belt, and then 'defy' Melody from both ends at once, ifyaknowhatimean...
My favorite thing about this panel is the contrast between the twins: the modesty of the one on the left vs. the IDGAF body language of her sister on the right -- I can tell she's gonna be a problem for Melody, but that'll just make her breaking all the more enjoyable to witness (perhaps she might need an assist from her mistress' in order to break her completely)!!
2022-05-21 08:39:35
This is so much worse than a bad dream... better? Hot.
Great stuff... I love how he, "punished", her... can we get a prequel to see more of his Powers?
2022-05-18 00:12:25
Feet are one of the most underappreciated elements of a woman's body. Alison has the most beautiful pair of feet in human existence. I'm so glad they're being emphasized.
I think the problem is that you can't rewind it and go to the previous page. You only can go forward. But that can be solved by adding a button in the lower left corner. Second problem I can imagine is that probably some people want to save separate pages as jpg or png on their hard drives. And thus mp4 does not solve their problem. Maybe if you don't want to lose some of the anmation make alternate version a series of gif's?
On other note. I personally like this story and format. It is funny because it looks as if you did a fanfic of your own work :D
Sorry Admin, the MP4 is a great addition but still not low enough tech for us viewers. Perhaps you can send printouts to our mailing addresses? Thanks a ton
I really liked this story arc. The ending was a nice touch, but I almost want an epilogue, just giving a bit more of an explanation on how it all happened. Also, I kind of think she should totally get a "reputation" on the server... It could be both beneficial and yet also negative, depending on how fast it spreads...
Please .....go back to the previous format of static jpgs....etc This interactive thing is both problematic on my computer and frankly annoying....or post a low tech alternative
Nice and smooth animations here; looking forward to seeing more when they come out! (Also, loaded just fine for my Firefox browser, so that's at least one instance of success outside of Chrome)
Love this story but. And given tmwe been told the others now serve as beasts of burden to the army I would love to some Pic of what they look like new... Before and after so to say. And midway too! As always excellent work and great storytelling!
If another chapter does get commissioned, I'd love to see what the transformation process looked like. Show a side-by-side recap of the events of comic1 with a real world view of him changing into a woman while playing the game. Your mtf-transformation in Light Chains 1 is my favorite.
Let this be a warning to those who neglect to read the fine print of the EUA before reflexively declaring it TL;DR and clicking "OK" -- unless, that is, you subconsciously want to be fucked over, then by all means, skip ahead and may damned be the consequences!!!
Think about it, jock goes from being the tall stud and then goes into the shower, turns it on and the magic water washes his old body away and shapes it into a little pretty cheerleader body, then the guys around all get to have fun with her and throw her around
Wham, bam, thankya "ma'am"! and tossed aside dismissively like a disgusting sack of trash 'til "she" lands on her ass off the bed with a ridiculous amount of cum oozing out of her crotch and staining the floor beneath her -- what sweet humiliation to be used as a fuck-hole so utterly and thoroughly!!!
I love the addition of the hearts for eyes! Anomia may have taken liberties with the "She should want it. A lot." wish and gave her some kinks that she has yet to discover!
