Yes, this would be the day after. Some time passes between volumes 4 and 5 (shown by hair growth). In Vol.4 after Alison reaches the requisite level of training, Mistress begins to take her out as her "personal assistant". It's fun to show her off but she is also kind of annoying and needy (Vol.4, Page 25), so Alison is assigned various odd jobs to keep her busy. She's not particularly skilled or reliable but she can handle putting books away in the library (Vol.5, Page 11-12) or these maid duties.
I'm currently writing a story about how someone from our plane of existence ends up in Mistress' plane of existence. He ends up in a similar situation to Allison
The image of her looking at herself in the mirror is one of the hottest drawings I've ever seen. You got her pose and every curve on her exactly perfect.
Excellent series. I can't wait for the next panel! The artwork is fantastic and unmatched by any other free genderswap comics I've seen. And there's actually a story that's interesting to this one. I really appreciate the work.
Past tense narration is just a story telling convention, it doesn't mean that someone is actually telling the story. The New Fit ending was a joke on the convention. I don't think this: http://sexylosers.com/201.html sort of ending would be a good idea here.
I picked past tense narration because it made the most sense for the transformation scene. It's hard to get believable present tense thoughts from a character who is having some intense unknown experience. It would either end up realistic and not contributing to the story, ie "what the fuck is happening!" over and over again; or it would be implausibly level headed ie "hmm I appear to be losing consciousness".
I like the idea of the color scheme slowly changing as the sun sets but things get a little surreal with the reds in the middle of the comic. Also, I'm wondering what you are going to do with the past tense thoughts, it kind of takes the reader away from the moment to moment unfolding of them. Although I think it turned out well in "A New Fit" with the ending.
Looking back almost 10 years later... this moment is still one of the most unique and special ones of our wonderful artist's expressions.
The mix of emotions on Alison's face as she thinks about her boobs for the first time, and the thoughts going through her head as she actually confirms what she is for the first time. It's relatable to some, hot to most, and mesmerizing to all.
